1st Person Narrative
I was out last night and got proper wrecked with me mates. We nicked some cider from me Dad and went to the park round the corner to get smashed. When we got there, there were some freaks in the park thinking they were all hard and started us. But we sorted them out and then carried on with the night. Got in at 2 in the morning and me Mam started having a go at me so I walked out and went back to me mates house for the night. The next day I had the worst hangover, and woke up with a banging headache.
3rd Person Narrative
They were stood in the park, in quite a large group. If anyone walked past they would intimidate them by forming a circle around making rude remarks. The things they were saying was disgraceful the people who walked through the park were visibly upset and scared about the whole situation. That group of youths looked pretty pleased with themselves when they saw what an impact they had made on the woman who had walked by. Our beautiful little community had been tainted by their rude and obnoxious behaviour.
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