Further improvements after gaining final feedback

After I finished my final product, I then gained some feedback to find out which areas could be improved upon within both my front cover and double page spread. I therefore have completed these improvements to get my completely finished final product. 

In relation to my front cover I was told that I needed to make my main sell line larger in order for it to stand out from the other sell lines, in order to do this I made the text larger and re-arranged the sell line so that the text was beside the model and was slightly over hery body. I think that this did help as it is now clear to the readers of which is the main sell line. I also needed to add a baseline because this is something that is expected in a industry standard magazine. I therefore added one that can be seen at the bottom of my front cover. I also had to change the price sign as it did not look proffessional and the placing was not right. These were all minor changes but added to how proffessional the product looks.

In relation to my double page spread the main issue was that there was a lot ofwhite empty space that needed filling. Therefore to fix this issue i re-arranged some of my images and changed the sizing on them. I think this did improve the overall look of the double page spread as it did not look as empty. There is still some white space that can be seen but there is a lot less and so it does not feel as empty.